Tobor7 | Tuesday, September 16, 2003 - 09:02 pm     (Page -12-) (illegible) "So who won Big Brother 4?" Tobor asks. "Can't remember. And who cares." They all respond. "There's always next year!" (illegible) ...push-up-pops. They help him out of his car and back onto his feet. "Can you walk around a bit?" Beruth asks. "Well if you're asking me to dance..." (illegible) They all head back to the bar, and eat and drink and have a good time together. And in time-lapse fashion the bar slowly empties until it is empty. A scratchy worn version of "Hotel California" fades up from the jukebox. |
Bonzacat | Tuesday, September 16, 2003 - 09:02 pm      |
Tobor7 | Tuesday, September 16, 2003 - 09:03 pm     (Page -14-) The camera slowly floats across the room, across the peanut shells and Over to Tobor's stool, where it dips down and tilts up to reveal the underneath of the stool seat... and an old worn dog-eared paperback book taped to the bottom of the stool. The camera moves in on the book until we can read the title: "Everyone Here But You Is Me" by Eric Blair. |
Bonzacat | Tuesday, September 16, 2003 - 09:04 pm      |
Tobor7 | Tuesday, September 16, 2003 - 09:04 pm     (Page -15-) We hold on this as the music comes up full. Fade to black. Roll credits. |
Bonzacat | Tuesday, September 16, 2003 - 09:05 pm      |
Justareader | Tuesday, September 16, 2003 - 09:05 pm     yeah!!! Bravo bravo!!! |
Meggieprice | Tuesday, September 16, 2003 - 09:07 pm     Bravo.... Author ....Bravo.. |
Ezgoing | Tuesday, September 16, 2003 - 09:14 pm     Magnifico!! A masterpiece is born! Bravo Tobor and Bonzacat! |
Freddy | Tuesday, September 16, 2003 - 09:16 pm     Bravo! Applause. Lot's of Applause. Encore! |
Costacat | Tuesday, September 16, 2003 - 09:29 pm     OMG, Tobor and BonzaCat!! You two OUTDID yourselves! You deserve triple bellinis and pounds and pounds of chocolate gummy bears (and catnip!) for that! I love it! I am laughing so loud I think I'm scaring my cats. And absolutely LOVING IT!!!!!!!!!! |
Nexell2 | Tuesday, September 16, 2003 - 09:30 pm     Very good. |
Woodpecke® | Tuesday, September 16, 2003 - 09:34 pm     That was superb. Best entertainment of the season. Great job! What a team. I'll bet rehearsals were interesting too! |
Tobor7 | Tuesday, September 16, 2003 - 09:37 pm     Rehearsals? We don't need no stinkin' rehearsals! |
Wendo | Tuesday, September 16, 2003 - 09:37 pm     Bravo! Bravo! Bravo! *clap, clap, clap* ad infinium. Excellent Tobor and Bonzacat, most excellent. |
Derby | Tuesday, September 16, 2003 - 09:40 pm     Tobor, Bonzacat.......that was the "best" thing to come out of BB4! A million thanks!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
Bonzacat | Tuesday, September 16, 2003 - 09:50 pm     It was a dress rehearsal..... Tobor was Dr. Carter and I was Scully! |
Smokey | Tuesday, September 16, 2003 - 10:04 pm     Author, Author!! |
Bonzacat | Tuesday, September 16, 2003 - 10:13 pm     Thanks, everyone!!!!
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Buggles | Tuesday, September 16, 2003 - 10:14 pm     That was incredibly creative & enjoyable... thank you Tobor & Bonza We may no longer have John Ritter but at least we have a sanctuary of BB laughs & glitter  |
Tobor7 | Tuesday, September 16, 2003 - 10:33 pm     Thanks everyone. Sorry if I missed anyone in the shout outs. It was not intentional. I did the best I could with what memory I have left, from CRS. I value all of you. |
Laisey | Tuesday, September 16, 2003 - 11:18 pm     Tobor, Absolutely wonderful; and I am so honored to have been part of your dream. BTW, you couldn't have picked a better time for the ending since the hurricane seems to be heading toward me in Virginia Beach and they're saying if we lose power, it could be a week before it is restored -- now I won't have to worry all that time about what is going on. You are truly gifted and I admire you greatly. |
Tobor7 | Tuesday, September 16, 2003 - 11:21 pm     Thanks for taking the time to read it. I did it in between all the great stuff on the feeds the past 2 days! LOL Just trying to keep the folks amused! I'm hoping that the storm does not cause much damage. I have a lot of friends on the east coast! Be safe and be well. |
Lancecrossfire | Tuesday, September 16, 2003 - 11:24 pm     Tobor, I too enjoyed your story and the pictures that Bonzacat put with it--great job too Bonzacat. Very creative and very entertaining!!! |
Slothkitten | Tuesday, September 16, 2003 - 11:55 pm     Tobor and Bonzacat...I just delurked over in the other thread...I have to say..Magnum Opus!!! The chatters thread has it's own Fred&Ginger..Bogey&Becall...The Cohen brothers! Thank you both, I was on the edge of my seat,lol.Please,may i have some more? |