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Please vote/which do you like better?

The TVClubHouse: General Discussions ARCHIVES: 2005 Mar. ~ 2005 May: Free Expression... (ARCHIVES): Please vote/which do you like better? users admin

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Julieboo
Member

02-05-2002

Saturday, May 07, 2005 - 9:08 am   Edit Post Move Post Delete Post View Post    
Oh schoolmarm, that would be great! Where are you staying???

Twiggyish
Member

08-14-2000

Saturday, May 07, 2005 - 6:58 pm   Edit Post Move Post Delete Post View Post    
Such precious pictures!

Julieboo
Member

02-05-2002

Monday, May 09, 2005 - 10:43 am   Edit Post Move Post Delete Post View Post    
Please critique (do not be afraid of being critical)

I am not super happy with the "verse" so feel free to add any suggestions. Overall, I like the "6" but does the other stuff looks cheesy?

Any help is appreciated!!!



Texannie
Member

07-16-2001

Monday, May 09, 2005 - 10:55 am   Edit Post Move Post Delete Post View Post    
Uh..does Ryan have a Mommy? Where is her pic in the invite????

Julieboo
Member

02-05-2002

Monday, May 09, 2005 - 11:00 am   Edit Post Move Post Delete Post View Post    
I know, I know... I need to give the camera to dh once in a while!!! I really don't have many of Ryan with me. I need some!

Vee
Member

02-23-2004

Monday, May 09, 2005 - 11:30 am   Edit Post Move Post Delete Post View Post    
Just because it will be a record of a very special day for Ryan, I would put the year in and I would follow standard comma usage. Also, even though we say "th" after dates, the "th" is best left out of printed material unless the date precedes the month.

I agree with Annie...your photo would be a very nice addition on the invitation because it is so very special and Ryan has two parents. You have the camera so it shouldn't be a problem, right?

This invitation is visually pleasing. I think you did a magnificent job!

Kaili
Member

08-31-2000

Monday, May 09, 2005 - 1:45 pm   Edit Post Move Post Delete Post View Post    
I still like it a lot- the only part that I don't like so much is the green writing right under the curve at the top of the six. not sure how wlse to describe it, but it's the only text beside at the bottom. It's just the placement- makes me think of the curve on the six as a spout or faucet that the words came out of. Hard to explain. Otherwise, very cute.

Twiggyish
Member

08-14-2000

Monday, May 09, 2005 - 1:57 pm   Edit Post Move Post Delete Post View Post    
You might want to make the writing a bit bigger. It looks great, though. I love the idea of the number with pics in it!

Kaili
Member

08-31-2000

Monday, May 09, 2005 - 1:59 pm   Edit Post Move Post Delete Post View Post    
Also, did you play around with it at all to see how it would look with some text above the 6 and some below it to sort of center the pictures lower on the invitation?

Your house has a ticket office???? :-)

Cher
Member

08-18-2004

Wednesday, May 11, 2005 - 1:30 pm   Edit Post Move Post Delete Post View Post    
Very creative. I like it alot.

Abby7
Member

07-17-2002

Wednesday, May 11, 2005 - 7:26 pm   Edit Post Move Post Delete Post View Post    
Julieboo, your son looks so much like Sia's (TVCH member in case you don't know) son IMO. She used to post lots of photos of her children here. I think her son is older than your son, though.

(My memory is terrible, though, when it comes to remembering photos here....so, I may have Sia's son mixed up with someone else).

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To answer your question, I think the card looks great. I agree, though, you really need to add a photo of yourself (the memory for your son).

Julieboo
Member

02-05-2002

Wednesday, May 11, 2005 - 7:35 pm   Edit Post Move Post Delete Post View Post    
Thanks guys!!! I will be adding a photo of me somewhere in there! Just gotta find my camera battery recharger!

Pamy
Member

01-02-2002

Wednesday, May 11, 2005 - 7:50 pm   Edit Post Move Post Delete Post View Post    
Abby, I agree he does look like Sia's kid.

Julie, that looks so awesome!!!!!!!

Skootz
Member

07-23-2003

Thursday, May 12, 2005 - 3:27 am   Edit Post Move Post Delete Post View Post    
Great invitation Julie. You have a great creative spark.

The only thing I would do, is like Twiggy said, is make the lettering a bit bigger.

Julieboo
Member

02-05-2002

Thursday, May 12, 2005 - 7:36 am   Edit Post Move Post Delete Post View Post    
Thanks you guys! You are all so nice and have some really good ideas....